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For Her

It started off like this
When I gave you that first kiss

It took you by surprise
And made me close my eyes

I won’t lie, I was scared
As you stopped and stared

I couldn’t even breathe
But then you kissed me

It shattered all our fear
And made our love clear

My feelings only grew
But inside I always knew

The time you fell from the swing
From the first time I heard you sing

The first time you held my hand
I was so nervous I couldn’t stand

Even though I can’t cook
You still give me that look

My hearts melts every time
Reminding me how you’re mine

You’re the ending to my story
And the happiness that I keep
My life is never boring
And why I’m peaceful as I sleep

I love you with all my might
I love you with my entire soul
You’re the love that’s always right
And the love I can’t control

You’re the reason why I fight
You’re the reason for my laughter
You’re the everlasting light
You’re my happily ever after

I know that I’m not perfect
And that you’ll have to try
But I will always be there for you
To always make it always right

So take me by surprise
Take my breath away
I’m yours to always keep
Your comfort and allay

I’m so thankful that I found you
And that I have you in my heart
‘Cause waking up to you
Is always my favorite part


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Just remember that if you love someone to always be there for them and to give them your all. You're going to have to fight. It's the fight that makes love last.



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:icontoxic-bubbly:
Toxic-Bubbly Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so adorable. :3 I loved it
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
awww thanks so much!
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AnnaxSarah Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:D how romantic
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh thank you =)
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AnnaxSarah Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
YOUR WELCOME:D
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Katiedude Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
Awww! You guys are so cute! i respect you! (: ^_^
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
=D aww thanks so much!
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MrSqueakums Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Professional Artist
That was.... adorable.
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you =D <3
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trevor4056 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
How do you do that? How do you submit a picture along with text? For the life of me I can't figure it out. Do you have to be a premium member or something?

Anyways bravo. It is a glorious beautiful day when literature makes it on the front page. :D and your poem could be the sappiest, gushiest and most beautiful love song ever. :D

Oh and let the rainbow flag fly. :D you guys are gorgeous.
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Okay I made a screen shot to show you

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So you will click the pencil icon that appears in that corner and click change preview image x3

And you can also see that you can add and edit text and ECT ^^

And thank you soo much <33
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trevor4056 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
Oh. What the heck did I do? Thanks.

There's an edit text button? That could have saved a lot of time if I had known about that.

:D
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
xD yea, it took me a moment to figure it out as well lol
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trevor4056 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
:D
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:icontrevor4056:
trevor4056 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
Wait never mind I figured it out. Woo. The rest I wrote still stands. :D
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:iconliving-the-story:
living-the-story Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
How sweet~ :heart:
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww thank you
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DreamingMind-set Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely.:hooray:
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you =D
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DreamingMind-set Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem:woohoo:
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staino Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013   Traditional Artist
I'm sure you have had around 10.000 people tell you how sweet this poem is. But is is really is... :D I can't say anything different.
My favorite part is:
You’re the ending to my story
And the happiness that I keep
My life is never boring
And why I’m peaceful as I sleep

This kind of love is to be envied. :thumbsup:
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Awww ;^; well thank you so much <333 you make me super smiley and stuff <3

I am glad you like it =D
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:iconmatsoft90:
matsoft90 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww thats beautiful!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much
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:icontwinkie101:
Twinkie101 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student
Oh, this is so sweet! Best to you both!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
<3 thank youuu!
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:iconstevienoob:
stevienoob Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
What a beautiful poem!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww thanks so much!
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CrystalWolfXx Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWW It's so beautiful! This poem is nothing but pure love! Amazing!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow thank you so much ;;
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:iconsebbylover231:
sebbylover231 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
So sweet, I can't take it! She is one lucky gal!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
;^; nah I am the lucky one
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:iconsebbylover231:
sebbylover231 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I hope both of you are happy together forever, kinda like a fairytale!
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ObscureSanctuary Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
That was amazingly adorable, and so romantic! I can't wait to be in love like that with someone
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww you will one day for sure ;;
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:iconracerman56:
racerman56 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Says how you feel about her and that is all that matters, nice shot too
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Aw thank you o3o

yes it does =D
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Chibi-mimi-tan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope you're very happy, that was way cute :heart:
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes, I am very happy xD Thank you so much
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MidnightHobbit Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww! That's how I feel about my girl except she kinda found me through a mutual friend. The song "Calling You" by Blue October... "I thought that the world had lost it's sway; It's so hard sometimes; Then I fell in love with you; then came you; and you took that away; it's not so difficult, the world is not so difficult."
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww that is such a pretty song ;^;
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MidnightHobbit Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes it is!
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Doveswing Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very pretty. The poem as well as you and your girlfriend. :)
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Awww gosh thank you so much
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Doveswing Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome. :) I'm straight, but I have a bisexual best friend and a bisexual cousin, who even has a girlfriend of her own. I don't have anything against gay/lesbian couples. People have the right to love who they want.
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Valkyriye Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awww that's adorable. :)
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
^^ Thank you sooo very much!
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ebony927 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
upto I looked at the check which had said $4808, I have faith ...that...my best friend was like truley making money part time from their laptop.. there aunts neighbour started doing this 4 less than seven months and just paid the mortgage on there cottage and bourt a great new Lotus Elan. this is where I went, kep2.com
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k-o-stradivarius Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
This is SO SWEET & ADORABLE :)
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you so much ;;
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