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You say your life is falling to pieces
You say his doesn't matter, he is only a fetus

But once you make the choice to take his own life
You might as well stab him with the blade of a knife

'Cause he won't come back, he won't ever live
He won't learn to walk, to smile, or be active

He won't ever cry when he falls off his bike
He won't say, 'mommy, I love you, good night.'

That tiny little baby that you never knew
Will never have his hopes and wishes come true

He can't change the world or set things straight
He can't say he's sorry after he makes a mistake

No one can tell you what that boy can devise
Not from the tip of his nose or the gleam in his eye

Your unborn son is going to be so great
He's going to have lots of friends and go on many dates

His hair will be blonde with many curls
But don't be too mad when he loses your pearls

Once he is two he'll drive you nuts
He'll come up with excuses and ifs and buts

But most of all, he'll be your entire life
But not if you take away his only right

So before you murder the baby in your belly
And turn his skin into particles and jelly

Look at your future and look at your baby
Please don't be selfish and maybe…just maybe

He'll watch as his bride walks down the isle
He'll start to cry and stare with a smile

He'll look to you and whisper those words
That have been stuck in your head and left unheard

'Mother I love you, you gave me my wife.
But not only just her, but also my life'
And that my dear friends is why I am PRO LIFE!!!
Holy crap....no flaming! I am only sharing my own opinions because today I felt inspired. I KNOW that there are many arguments stating why pro choice is 'alright'. I honestly don't believe a baby should ever 'have' to die. Everyone deserves a chance. ^^;

That little baby in the photo is my little brother. He is now two years old and to think about my mum aborting him for any reason makes me want to vomit. That little baby is SOOO wonderful and brings SOO much joy to everyone's life. That is why I believe in pro life. Because to take away that baby's future doesn't seem right.

God didn't give us babies so we could be selfish and get rid of them. Let us cherish the gift. :3

Okay...I am done now. xD
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Yamiga Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Writer
I loved this! This inspires me to write another poem!
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DragonOfEvil Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I'm pro-choice. I'm also an animal rights activist and an environmentalist. What do you think of that? I'd be happy to explain why I'm a ARA and an environmentalist If you would like to know.
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PS2addictedlioness Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"'Mother I love you, you gave me my wife.
But not only just her, but also my life'
And that my dear friends is why I am PRO LIFE!!!"

Not to insult you or anything or disrespect the poem you've written, which is pretty well worded if I may say, but I can't help but think that the 'you gave me my wife' part kind of sounds like he married his own sister xD
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, I was meaning for it to be more like, since he had his life, he was able to grow up and get married to who is now his wife.  I shouldn't have put that xD  it does sound odd now that I am looking at it.  Whoops
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PS2addictedlioness Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I figured it was meant to be read as so, but I couldn't help but snort, I apologize xD
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww you're completely fine ^^  You're such a sweetheart, no worries <333
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PS2addictedlioness Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahah, thank you! <3
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Adrianathekittylover Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
THIs is just beautiful! 

sighn
Sometimes I mis Peru deeply 
abortion was ilegal there since 1924
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PerspectiveGhost2 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hooray for all the happy comments! It makes me so sad how many vile comments usually end up on things talking about abortion. Thanks for making this!
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JaqErant92 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.
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lokitheinvinsable Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
i am pro life because i've always wanted kids, and  every child i save when i'm fully grown, i will adopt them too and attempt to give them a decent life
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gallifreyan-giraffes Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Student General Artist
This is beautiful...
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you =D
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Slakovak Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What if your kid is a girl? Lol, just kidding. This is awesome. It definitely describes ALL of my feelings. Abortion is disgusting and wrong, and I may get yelled at for this, but I wouldn't be able to bear seeing my child in bloody pieces on a metal table.
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DemonFox9Tails Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This made me so happy I cried! I am also a Pro life and I believe every baby should have a chance at life!
Thank you for making it! :')
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DarkCougar55S Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
~sapphire-adoptables is trying to fight with you for have a different opinion, Xarti. Let's not take her seriously. =)
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sapphire-adoptables Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My sister died in childbirth because she was denied an abortion. So did the child.

 I should add my mother killed herself a month later.

Oh, yay. You guys won. I hope you pro-lifers are happy I'm crying over my keyboard right now. I hope you're happy that I want to die, every day, all day.

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Yamiga Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Writer
I'm sorry but why would you look for a Pro Life poem if it makes you cry, if you're against it. That is the stupidest thing and it is impossible for me to feel sorry for you. I feel for your sister, and I pray that her soul may rest in peace, but you are an idiot.
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Mistwolf4 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student Artist
I'm so sorry. :( -pats back-
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
wow thanks for your comment. Like that makes me so happy to know there are other people out there that also understand me ^^
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DemonFox9Tails Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course! Please keep up the wonderful work!!!
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LostKudzu Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What if the mother was physically incapable of carrying the baby? What if she knew she and the child might die during birth?
I don't want an argument, but I'm curious if you think that abortion should be outlawed in all cases...I know some pro-lifers do.
I personally think that it is not right as a form of birth control, but that in some circumstances, with a doctor's agreement, it is acceptable. I do not think that the fetus is a person yet (during the time abortion is legal, the baby does not think or feel) but I agree that it is destroying potential.
Therefore, I don't think that abortion is murder, but that it is entirely undesirable.
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Okay, well I do believe that you can abort it if the baby is already going to die or if the mother is going to die and the child only has a chance. Because then that is medical reasons. But 75 percent of the reason why woman have abortions is because they don't want the baby because they can't 'emotionally' take it. Or because they're not ready, or they don't have time. it's selfish reasons. I'm sorry, but if you're having sex whether it's protected or not, you HAVE to put that in your mind it could happen. Otherwise stop having sex. T.T; because it's not the baby's fault you wanna fuck around. It's like, welp....I guess I get to die because my mom and dad wanted only pleasure. Ugh....I am sorry. It upsets me how selfish girls can be sometimes.

But the whole the baby can't think and feel is bull crap. Okay, yea, he is a tiny little guy, and he likely can't think cause his little brain is growing, but he can still feel. He has a beating heart at 4 weeks old. o.o That's usually when you find out you're pregnant. And that heartbeat might be small, but it means he is alive. =/ ya'know? And it's just like.....yea, maybe if you yanked him out of the mom's tummy he would die, but if you did that to a 23 week old baby, he would, too. My sister was born at that age and if it wasn't for doctors she would have died. Does that mean, she wasn't a person? of course not. =/ She is still a person.

And that technically would mean mentally challenged people don't deserve life because they can't take care of themselves without someone else there and they also can't think for themselves. I guess all I am trying to say is that even though we're small, when we have a heartbeat, we have life. We as humans need to protect life; not be selfish and destroy it. Dx
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LostKudzu Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I agree that if the mother 'can't take it', adoption is the answer, not abortion.
On the other hand, I disagree that "the whole the baby can't think and feel is bull crap". At the time when most people get abortions, the heart actually is not beating yet. Sometimes, it is a medical emergency, however. But even so, a heartbeat means nothing. That just means that they are circulating blood in order to dispose of waste, etc. The heart has nothing to do with feelings!
At this stage, the brain is not developed. It cannot think or feel pain, as some pro-life propoganda declares. At a certain point of development, the third stage, abortion is illegal.
And your sister was born prematurely. However, she was already developed enough to survive with medical help. Abortion at this stage is illegal.
Of course she is human. The issue is whether an eighth of an inch long lump of cells that cannot think or feel is more valuable than the mother.
Mentally disabled people are a different story. They still have brain function, hello! They still think! They still feel pain!
It's actually more like someone in a coma. The family has been paying for care for a year now, but it looks like Grandpa is stuck in it. The family has the right to end care.
And yes, it is alive. It's like a little vegetable that cannot think or feel.

All in all, I think that abortion is the choice of the mother.
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You have good points so I don't wanna fight with you. I mean, I do not believe your way of thinking is wrong at all. It makes sense. I just have slightly different opinions and that's okay. ^^
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LostKudzu Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, you're a lot more mature than me!!!!! Thank you, I am too argumentative! Ack! Besides, I can't even vote yet anyway...so all politics: whoosh. Yay! Out the window!
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
xD I've just learned that you shouldn't try and change the way someone thinks. Not if that's what they honestly believe. Because it definitely doesn't make you a bad person x3
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LostKudzu Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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c-beluga Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
What if it would be more humane for the fetus if the mother chose to abort it?
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well, I think that if it is best for it to be done, then yea, but if there is no reason at all then I doubt it's a good idea.
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c-beluga Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
Thankyou, thats why I'm pro choice. I'm glad that there is a pro lifer who at least respects a woman's choice. :)
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the-trippster Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are the nicest pro-life person I've seen on here so far, you're so well mannered and not wanting to start anything. Kudos ahh
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow...thank you <33 that makes me happy to hear. Mostly because I usually get people throwing knifes at me. x.o
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birduncaged Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) I'm happy you wrote this, hopefully people who see this and are pro-choice will think again and change their mindt to pro-life. It's a powerful piece.
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I hope it impacts people the way I meant for it to. I mean, I know there isn't much i can do, yet writing is the way I speak and so that's why i hope it can help others.
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birduncaged Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
when I said do it again, I ment do it in another way ofcourse
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I am really glad you commented on this. I mean, you can honestly understand since it happened to you. I am glad you changed your mind ;; I mean, i don't blame you if you did. Stuff happens. Just glad you understand <33333333
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birduncaged Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This made me so sad... I made the mistake of being so selfish that I had a abortion once. I genually regret it, but it won't ever change anything would it... Done is done, and you can't do it again. To everybody who is pro-choice I'll say this: change your mind and be pro-life! Nothing can justify killing your child, NOTHING. Innocent childen are being killed.. that is not right. And mothers are being told it is ok, it is not, and many of us regret it the rest of our life. I find it difficult to believe that anyone who has thought things really through can be pro-choice... Pro-life is the only right thing.
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Natalie4ever Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh wow this made me cry, thank you so much for sharing this~!
It's truly is an unfortunate subject..

In my perspective, my mother is a labor & delivery nurse so she's actually is the first person many babies first see when they are first born (she's been doing it for 20+ years). So my family is really touchy on this subject, but it goes to show that life shouldn't be taken for granted....
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I agree with you. I mean, it is a choice and i get that. It shouldn't be one, but truth is it is...and we need to really think about what we are doing before we take it away. That is simply all I am saying 8D

And your mother sounds wonderful. :3 give her a huge hug for me!
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Natalie4ever Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha completely agree~ and thank you >U<
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kalez Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Professional Writer
I love this! :D

People just don't understand that one person does not have the right to take the life of another, regardless of situation or outcome. Life is the most precious thing in the universe.

And as for the argument of "it's not a human", what exactly makes it "transform" into a human? coming out of a womb? what type of transformation is that? none. simply illogical classification to justify murder.
If someone wants to argue "that it is still developing to become a human", then I will state that you don't stop developing until around age 22. careful all you disobedient teens, your parents can still abort you, using that reasoning.
The only justifiable reason for abortion is when complications threaten the life of both the mother and the baby, because then it is a choice of who lives or dies. I have no right to decide that for anyone.


Life is precious, excuses are invalid.
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconpenguinclapplz: Omg wow thank you! Seriously one of the best comments I received. You seriously just made my day! I totally agree with you. People seem to forgot that we are all human and that doesn't start at birth. I was born really early and I guess in most people's mind I wasn't considered a real baby, but why should I not receive life just because I am still small and born at 7 months?

I guess it might be a selfish human thing. A lot of people think of themselves before a life of another and if they can sugar coat it and make it seem like it is okay, they do it.

I once knew someone who tried to sugar coat abortion. Saying it was okay and to go to this certain clinic because they won't make you feel bad. You need to feel bad! You're about to murder your own child.

=/ really just sad.

It reminds me of a shirt I saw the other day that said "I noticed that all the people who are okay with abortion have already been born." Made me smile because it is true. We need to stand up for those who aren't born. Someone has to.

Yea, I agree. If there is a medical issue that is a whole different matter and then it can be addressed differently.
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kalez Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks :P I try to look at things logically, and abortion is completely illogical. I thought we are a smart race, and yet we kill our children with the excuse of a categorization...

I also added this to that, because i used to elsewhere later that night :P

Even defects are no excuse. My hero, Stephen Hawking, is the most crippled man I know; he cannot even speak without a computer, but he revolutionized science and physics as we know it. The Dr told us my daughter might have defects, yet look at her now. I was born with defects, yet here I am (I recovered from them). Doctors are not always correct.

I had one of our family members argue by stating that if a law was issued that didn't allow tattoos or piercings, telling you what we could do with our bodies, is that alright? I said, regardless, tattoos have nothing to do with murder.

The problem is that these people are only thinking of themselves, their body, yet it isn't their body that is being turned into a pile of mush. They aren't the ones dying.
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Yea and because it effects their body they assume that it is okay to do whatever they want to what's inside them. Because they say it's their choice and their body and if they're not ready then they should wait. But you have to own up to your mistakes. If you accidentally got pregnant then you need to realize that you can't handle a baby then they should foster their child. Give it to a family who would love it. I just see how so many people these days think that just because they're not ready they can get rid of the problem....by murder.

it's sad because only a few months ago this happened to my GFs friend and she was going to abort the baby because she wasn't ready and I blew up and started to fight with my GF because she told her friend that she would pay for it if needed and it made me so angry because both of them didn't see anything wrong with it. In the end her boyfriend convinced her not to abort the baby, but it was scary that she almost did it. Dx

Oh I know what you mean. You're not even doing anything to your body. Its what you're doing to someone else's body. =/
Sad enough they can't even choose Dx
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kalez Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Yes, that would be a nice outcome. Even if they were allowed to give the baby up or whatever, they should be forced to foster it so they realize what they have done. Abortion is just a scapegoat. They learn nothing. No consequences whatsoever. I mean sure some people realize what they have done afterwords, but many people just do it again.

Why are these people so stupid?! It irks me something fierce. :P
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Mild-Man-Nerd Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hmmm...although I remain prochoice, its always been easy to see this side of the argument. Definitely an interesting example of morally applied existential philosophy. Very well done.
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Why thank you. :3 I don't mind if someone doesn't agree with me, I just think that my opinion could be shared because it is nice to, ya'know? 8D
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XBrielleX Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this poem, it started to make me cry.
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
aww ;; no crying! *hugs*
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