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I cross my arms and take a sigh
I wish these hours would go by

One two three and then a pop
Oh my god, no, please stop

You look at me and give a smile
This is never going to be worth while

I hold my hand out for the gum
You shake your head and stick out your tongue

Three two one and then a pop
Listen now, you better stop!

I move one over from my seat
You move one closer right by me

You blow a bubble, I roll my eyes
You won't do it if you're wise

Took one quick second and another pop
I yelled out this has to stop!

I reached for the gum inside your mouth
You pull away and start to pout

Pop pop pop, ugh, not again
Give me the gum and let me win!

I nurse my temples on my head
And know my face is becoming red

My lips meet your's and then my tongue
I will get it, I'll find that gum!

My tongue takes wonder inside your mouth
I find the candy and my heart shouts

I start to chew what was your's
You glare at me down to my core

Then, I swallow, the gum is now gone
You knew this was coming all along

You pull out out a new stick of gum
My insides are frozen and very numb

I look at you as you begin to laugh
Don't make me have to get it back
An older poem I never posted. xD I just adore this one. :3
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:icondashieandluna:
Dashieandluna Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Student Artist
So funny
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laartje205 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Is this based on your Sebaciel fanfiction?
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Umm, it wasn't originally, but I guess it could be :)
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:iconunbiasedcritic:
UnbiasedCritic Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
It's a bit different but i like it.
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh thank you. ^^ Glad you like it
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mynameisjessica123 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
teehee
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Heehee ^^
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Lacriyme Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's so cute! :3
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Daw ;; t-thank you~ <33
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:iconlacriyme:
Lacriyme Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome~
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:iconminsa:
minsa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Artist
ahwohoho oh damn that was nice man :thumbsup:
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
n.n thank you <3
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:iconminsa:
minsa Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Student Artist
ur very welcome ^-^
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yaoihater1584 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
This is so stupid, you should just end your pathetic existence.
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much-too-deja-vu Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's just a poem. Way to stay classy, bro.
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
If I truly went out and killed myself I am sure you'd feel bad and if you didn't then there is nothing beautiful or good about yourself. It can only mean you're missing a heart. I don't think you realize how cold hearted a person can be to tell someone to end their life because of a poem they wrote. The correct comment you should have wrote on this poem if you didn't like it should be, 'this poem is not my favorite, but I liked that you still posted it. Hopefully you'll write something in the near future that is more my style.' Or you could have not posted anything at all. You're only being a immature bully when you tell someone to end their life. You're pathetic and weak and if it is anyone being stupid, my dear friend, it is you.
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SkyGazer23 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
haha that was cute;
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Daww why thank you~
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Sithis666 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahah, this is totally cute, love it :)
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
n.n thanks so much ^^ glad you liked it
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Sithis666 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome :)
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sa-cha Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
omg so cute and funny!!! it's nice to see a happy poem for a change :love:
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
haha right? I am glad I posted it
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hazardbaby Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
So cute! My only suggestion is to change "your's" to "yours" because the apostrophe shouldn't be there. Haha I almost laughed out loud at "You pull out a new stick of gum." I think we can relate to that. (:
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD Okay, I shall go through and change that! Thank you.
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Sesshomarusama3 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
awwwww! funny!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
n.n thank you~
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Sesshomarusama3 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
ur welcome!
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BrightandCloudy Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
Haha, aww! This is so cute! I love it <3
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Dawww yay! I am so glad n.n
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Freedan90 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Photographer
Lol this is a cute one. I like it ^_^
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
n.n Omg why thank you~
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Freedan90 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Student Photographer
Of course ^_^ Thanks for sharing.
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ronkgsi Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
collaberry sexy !! [link]
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PopCornSalt Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's cute, haha! X3
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
aww thank you <3
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icedoll101 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Writer
So cute!! <3
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
n.n thanks so much
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LeucisticRaccoon Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD

I'm Lovin it!!!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Awww yay! Thank you =D
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Trilbies Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That was pretty awesome, I love the theme and how it goes from silly to sensual. :thumbsup:
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD awww thank you. Yea, I can't believe I wrote this some days xD
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Trilbies Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem. [:
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Mooneclipse777 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
very cute
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Dawww thank you :3
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Talidaga-Montrega Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Way for the other person to score a kiss that stupid ja. This was a cute story :D
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD thank you ^^ Yea, it was smart of them for sure xD
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SlackInPeace Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
That was... Unexpected. To say the least. But I suppose that's the beauty of it. :)
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD Yea, I guess so. I dunno what I was thinking when I wrote this haha
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sarani-chan Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
brilliant! :icongreatjobplz:
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