I cross my arms and take a sigh
I wish these hours would go by
One two three and then a pop
Oh my god, no, please stop
You look at me and give a smile
This is never going to be worth while
I hold my hand out for the gum
You shake your head and stick out your tongue
Three two one and then a pop
Listen now, you better stop!
I move one over from my seat
You move one closer right by me
You blow a bubble, I roll my eyes
You won't do it if you're wise
Took one quick second and another pop
I yelled out this has to stop!
I reached for the gum inside your mouth
You pull away and start to pout
Pop pop pop, ugh, not again
Give me the gum and let me win!
I nurse my temples on my head
And know my face is becoming red
My lips meet your's and then my tongue
I will get it, I'll find that gum!
My tongue takes wonder inside your mouth
I find the candy and my heart shouts
I start to chew what was your's
You glare at me down to my core
Then, I swallow, the gum is now gone
You knew this was coming all along
You pull out out a new stick of gum
My insides are frozen and very numb
I look at you as you begin to laugh
Don't make me have to get it back
An older poem I never posted. xD I just adore this one. :3
Is this based on your Sebaciel fanfiction?
It's a bit different but i like it.
That's so cute! :3
ahwohoho oh damn that was nice man
This is so stupid, you should just end your pathetic existence.
It's just a poem. Way to stay classy, bro.
If I truly went out and killed myself I am sure you'd feel bad and if you didn't then there is nothing beautiful or good about yourself. It can only mean you're missing a heart. I don't think you realize how cold hearted a person can be to tell someone to end their life because of a poem they wrote. The correct comment you should have wrote on this poem if you didn't like it should be, 'this poem is not my favorite, but I liked that you still posted it. Hopefully you'll write something in the near future that is more my style.' Or you could have not posted anything at all. You're only being a immature bully when you tell someone to end their life. You're pathetic and weak and if it is anyone being stupid, my dear friend, it is you.
haha that was cute;
Hahah, this is totally cute, love it
omg so cute and funny!!! it's nice to see a happy poem for a change
So cute! My only suggestion is to change "your's" to "yours" because the apostrophe shouldn't be there. Haha I almost laughed out loud at "You pull out a new stick of gum." I think we can relate to that. (:
Haha, aww! This is so cute! I love it <3
Lol this is a cute one. I like it ^_^
That's cute, haha! X3
So cute!! <3
I'm Lovin it!!!
I'm Lovin it!!!
That was pretty awesome, I love the theme and how it goes from silly to sensual.
Way for the other person to score a kiss that stupid ja. This was a cute story
That was... Unexpected. To say the least. But I suppose that's the beauty of it.