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We all have problems, it seems to be
We all want something we cannot see
We all feel like we're failures on the inside
But outwardly you hide it like it's some surprise

We look at the cutters like their a mess
They don't know what they want so we all digress
But a problem is a problem whether big or small
And sometimes it's not even a problem at all

Like the child who is crying over a broken toy
Or the little baby laughing who is filled with joy
The mother who lost her very first child
To the teenager who's careless and runs around wild

The world we live in is a crazy disaster
And we are the ones who is its ringmaster
So to those who destroy is and fill it with hate
Damn them to hell along with their mistakes

To the gays and trans and all in between
To the ones hurting and crying with pleas
Love who you want and never be fake
Don't listen to haters for goodness sake


Don't be too hard on yourself, you'll make mistakes
You'll fall in love and have your heart break
You'll have bad habits and have bad days
You'll find yourself caught into a daze

Stop yourself now and listen to me
Don't walk away, I know you're not busy
You only live once, so live your life proud
Always smile and raise your voice loud

The greatest gift of all was being born human
The freedom of you will never be ruined
So scream in the rain and simply be you
Eh, what the heck, even get a tattoo

And when your times go and it comes to an end
Always know that life was your friend…

Look I wrote something! Haha....ha...err.....yea..... *clears throat* anyway, uhh...I hope you guys like it. 8D I don't even know if this poems makes sense. I kinda just...uh...typed...and then yea. o.o; But don't get too mad at me if I repeat myself or make ZERO sense. xD This is totally sloppy. I wrote in in like....20ish minutes. /shottt

But heck I still wrote something and that is all that matters. xD

WE ARE HUMAN GUISE! And that is why we're FOOKING AWESOME! ^^;
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:iconchey4ever:
Chey4ever Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD i loved it :3 it made complete sense and i am happy to have known it was written XD
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh wow thank you :3 it was really fun to write it too ^^
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:iconchey4ever:
Chey4ever Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome and i'm sure it was :3 |^0^/
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shadow9393 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
omg..i made me cry


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making a poem bout zeus and hades
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:iconlacriyme:
Lacriyme Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It absolutely makes sense, I love it <3
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
I love this :3
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minsa Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Student Artist
i needed this speech , and i thank u for it, for cheering me up thank u c':
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chalekam Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You made a masterpiece within 20 minutes! The Grammer & Spelling Police (aka Haters) will knit pick, but you speak truth, you Rhyme AWESOME and are far too modest. Thank you for openning my eyes.
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Serendiipitii Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really love this, describes humans so well :heart:
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theresahelmer Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional Photographer
Beautifully written
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