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We all have problems, it seems to be
We all want something we cannot see
We all feel like we're failures on the inside
But outwardly you hide it like it's some surprise

We look at the cutters like their a mess
They don't know what they want so we all digress
But a problem is a problem whether big or small
And sometimes it's not even a problem at all

Like the child who is crying over a broken toy
Or the little baby laughing who is filled with joy
The mother who lost her very first child
To the teenager who's careless and runs around wild

The world we live in is a crazy disaster
And we are the ones who is its ringmaster
So to those who destroy is and fill it with hate
Damn them to hell along with their mistakes

To the gays and trans and all in between
To the ones hurting and crying with pleas
Love who you want and never be fake
Don't listen to haters for goodness sake


Don't be too hard on yourself, you'll make mistakes
You'll fall in love and have your heart break
You'll have bad habits and have bad days
You'll find yourself caught into a daze

Stop yourself now and listen to me
Don't walk away, I know you're not busy
You only live once, so live your life proud
Always smile and raise your voice loud

The greatest gift of all was being born human
The freedom of you will never be ruined
So scream in the rain and simply be you
Eh, what the heck, even get a tattoo

And when your times go and it comes to an end
Always know that life was your friend…

Look I wrote something! Haha....ha...err.....yea..... *clears throat* anyway, uhh...I hope you guys like it. 8D I don't even know if this poems makes sense. I kinda just...uh...typed...and then yea. o.o; But don't get too mad at me if I repeat myself or make ZERO sense. xD This is totally sloppy. I wrote in in like....20ish minutes. /shottt

But heck I still wrote something and that is all that matters. xD

WE ARE HUMAN GUISE! And that is why we're FOOKING AWESOME! ^^;
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:iconchey4ever:
Chey4ever Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD i loved it :3 it made complete sense and i am happy to have known it was written XD
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh wow thank you :3 it was really fun to write it too ^^
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:iconchey4ever:
Chey4ever Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome and i'm sure it was :3 |^0^/
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shadow9393 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
omg..i made me cry


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making a poem bout zeus and hades
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:iconlacriyme:
Lacriyme Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It absolutely makes sense, I love it <3
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
I love this :3
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:iconminsa:
minsa Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Student Artist
i needed this speech , and i thank u for it, for cheering me up thank u c':
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chalekam Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You made a masterpiece within 20 minutes! The Grammer & Spelling Police (aka Haters) will knit pick, but you speak truth, you Rhyme AWESOME and are far too modest. Thank you for openning my eyes.
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Serendiipitii Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really love this, describes humans so well :heart:
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:icontheresahelmer:
theresahelmer Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional Photographer
Beautifully written
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:iconzebragirl19:
zebragirl19 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
<3 it
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
That's sweet. And of course, my life is my best friend - he never leaves me no matter what, and never will until death do us apart. :D
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MandyMullins2 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
This.Is.Beautiful! :iconiloveyouplz:
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SnazyAbby Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Student General Artist
this is great! <3 especially for only 20 minutes! i don't want to be a critique but I always like it when people give me some hints- ( you prob already know this <:) )
you should work on it some more and clean up some typos it really is a good poem!! just little things like "And we are the ones who {is} its ringmaster
So to those who destroy {is and fill} it with hate Damn them to hell along with their mistakes" _______________________________ ^ maybe putting {are} instead of {is}
____________________ ^ you probably meant {it} :)

ok sorry if you didn't want any critiques <:) love it!! keep up the good work! :P
(sorry if you can't read it! maybe i need someone to review my comments! haha)
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:iconeeveelee:
eeveelee Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
Oh....wow...;^;
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:iconyourfacesir:
yourfacesir Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
This is really good. o.o great job!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you ^^
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dreaminginrainbows Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
kjklsdfjkldsfj YES! This is so true!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
8D thank you
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desparateveins Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
Oh wow...this is wonderful!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
<3 oh thank ya'
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Panda-Virus Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
this is really good from something 20 minish. i always love reading what you write~
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh really? ;; that makes me really happy~
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Krusnik03 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry, it makes perfect sense. ^^ This is pretty good for a 20 minute poem, haha.
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD Yeah, it could have been worse lol
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:iconkrusnik03:
Krusnik03 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you plan on revising it? :)
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Umm I dunno....maybe Dx
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:iconkrusnik03:
Krusnik03 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah well. Doesn't matter. .u.
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teliiii Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful! Everything flowed very nicely together!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD thank you :3 <333
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:icon04whim:
04whim Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
Beautiful in mind too. And now, to be more me again, we must duel. :katana: :jarksaber:
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD I wanna be the ninja 8D
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:icon04whim:
04whim Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
Well, I was kinda working on "You're blonde, I'm dark haired" but whatever you want sweetie. :)
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Novox-Prayer Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
even if you dont think it is the greatest. you wrote that matters, you say you just typed, well thats what makes it true.
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
xD yea, I kinda from let my fingers do the talking on this xD
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Novox-Prayer Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And it turned out well
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xdragonxwolfx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
By god....this is truly inspirational...:icondesucraiplz:

I don't think that this is so bad, I mean, in 20 minutes, I would've done much worse....and I lol'd a bit at the tattoo part. XD

This is such a very motivational call of action. <3 The words just blended together and seemed...right. :'D

This is beautiful...thank you for sharing this with us~<3
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
awwww wow ;; it makes me really happy you liked this :3 I mean....it was quick, but it turned out good for what it was. xD

Of course, I love sharing my work 8D <33 makes me happy all you guys like to read it ^^
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Tsukimochi Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is very nice and it makes a lot of sense ^^
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh thank you ^^;
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