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In this digital screen
Is a picture of your face
You look so pretty and happy
Forever and always

I click the arrow over
And the camera shows a slide
It’s you and me together
But also that other guy

He always made me angry
I never liked him around
I screamed and fought with you
Which only brought us down

The photo changes again
But this time only us
We’re holding hands together
In the park out by the bus

I remember that night clearly
And the picture changed once more
It was like it was yesterday
That I found you on the floor

I screamed out your name
And tried to find my phone
But my hands were shaking badly
And I felt completely alone

The picture on the screen
Was of your grave
There were flowers and were people
And the memories in my brain

How could I not see
That you were never truly smiling
And that all along it was
Your hurt that you were piling

Maybe it was that guy
Or maybe it was me
Or maybe it was your job;
Perhaps your family

I glare into the screen
As a recording comes up
For the way I feel right now
Surely is enough

Your camera shows just me
And for I don’t have a clue
that as I look away
you whisper I love you


Hmm, well, I am not sure how I feel about this poem o.o
Pretty much you're not suppose to know too much about the characters. After all, you're hearing it from a guys point of view. You don't even know if he is dating her, how close he was with her, or nothing. It's pretty much is about a guy who was with/liked a girl and once she died he got a hold of her camera.
o.o But I hope you like it.

I dunno where I even got the idea to write something like this xD
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:iconanimedancer7:
Animedancer7 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D just beautiful. It made me cry sooo much :cries:
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Sasurealian Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I am glad you liked it. ;; but no tears ;;
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Krusnik03 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, this was beautiful!~ The ending was like... 'Whoa.'
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
;; I am glad it liked it! Thank you so much!
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Krusnik03 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. ^^
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Pentragon1990 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
That was unexpected! A extraordinary idea but I like it (especially because I made some photos some minutes ago with my beloved camera XD). You have really interesting ideas!
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh thank you ^^ I don't know...I usually don't plan anything when I just write...I just write xD Oh well xD
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Interesting idea. :)
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:iconsasurealian:
Sasurealian Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Well thank you!
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:iconsumgie1:
sumgie1 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Well, you're welcome. :D
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